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Heaven remains
Parted lips on his
slowly shutting
Our eyes locked
as one
entwined hands held above my head
And I fall
numb
into movements
his slow slide in and out
my beating heart
naked pressed into him
licking sweat from the nook of his neck
swearing oh god
Over and over
like a whore in church
until no more words can be spoken
and just the feel of heaven remains
slowly shutting
Our eyes locked
as one
entwined hands held above my head
And I fall
numb
into movements
his slow slide in and out
my beating heart
naked pressed into him
licking sweat from the nook of his neck
swearing oh god
Over and over
like a whore in church
until no more words can be spoken
and just the feel of heaven remains
Published 15th Jan 2015
| Edited 21st Aug 2016
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15th Jan 2015 4:40am
15th Jan 2015 4:41am
15th Jan 2015 8:52am
swearing oh god
Over and over
like a whore in church
hehe made me smile
creative lines
Rose
Over and over
like a whore in church
hehe made me smile
creative lines
Rose
15th Jan 2015 1:18pm
15th Jan 2015 9:32am
15th Jan 2015 1:18pm
4th Apr 2015 6:39am
Excellent write.Done in good taste with class.That is truly poetry,a poets poem.
22nd Sep 2015 2:42am
