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The Girl
It always starts with the girl,
the one I just met,
the one I used to know,
the one I called a lover,
the one I can't let go.
Then it turns into
the girl I just left,
the girl I want to forget,
the girl I hate seeing another,
the girl I wish wanted me back.
Then it all comes to an end with
the girl I met at the wrong moment,
the girl I can't let myself think about,
the girl I knew could never be mine,
the girl I lose like I always do.
the one I just met,
the one I used to know,
the one I called a lover,
the one I can't let go.
Then it turns into
the girl I just left,
the girl I want to forget,
the girl I hate seeing another,
the girl I wish wanted me back.
Then it all comes to an end with
the girl I met at the wrong moment,
the girl I can't let myself think about,
the girl I knew could never be mine,
the girl I lose like I always do.
Published 14th Jan 2015
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14th Jan 2015 6:12pm
14th Jan 2015 8:07pm
10th Feb 2015 6:07am
10th Feb 2015 1:37pm
Much obliged William. You should check out my short story "Giving It Up". It's back a few post pages and I am still yet to finish it, but it's pretty cool. Quite explicit at times with drug use, sex and violence, kinda intense with a slight bit of comedy surprisingly.
Anonymous
10th Feb 2015 1:42pm
fucking girls! ;) we suck sometimes.
nice write. it is a clear picture of that excitement that often turns to ash.
nice write. it is a clear picture of that excitement that often turns to ash.
29th May 2016 7:20pm
Lovely poem, your repetition adds to the meaning well. An emotional piece, well done.
