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Moments in a Marriage
We come and go
Independent contractors of a life
Watching the news together
A slow motion work in progress
Together many years
Dog walks, family stuff, sharing
A popsicle after dinner
Coconut for her, lemon for me
Moments in a marriage
Affection, gentle touch, sharing
Respect, dignity, love
Independent contractors of a life
Watching the news together
A slow motion work in progress
Together many years
Dog walks, family stuff, sharing
A popsicle after dinner
Coconut for her, lemon for me
Moments in a marriage
Affection, gentle touch, sharing
Respect, dignity, love
Published 14th Jan 2015
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Anonymous
14th Jan 2015 11:11am
this is a picture of good. i love the little part about sharing popsicles. very...normal...and tender. makes this 'real' and not just some other love poem.
"a slow motion work in progress"
you speak much truth with that line.
good one, cowboy.
"a slow motion work in progress"
you speak much truth with that line.
good one, cowboy.
14th Jan 2015 11:38am
14th Jan 2015 12:10pm
This is realism that we all fight for when loves needed
well done for reminding us all xD
well done for reminding us all xD
14th Jan 2015 12:11pm
14th Jan 2015 12:13pm
Lovely reconciliation with reality. Never doubt your skills to artfully blend words my friend.
This is good.
This is good.
14th Jan 2015 12:49pm
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14th Jan 2015 1:20pm
Excellent capture of marriage....sometimes I wonder about it too...but your poem will make me reflect a little bit more today. Thank you.
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