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~~ feelings I harbor ~~
If I were to fall in love
It could only be with you
my heart longs to be lost
in your beautiful eyes
that seem to rival the bluest of skies
hesitant to let you know how I really feel
...the love I have for you
and how those feelings feel so real
worried about your reaction and
what you would say
or what you would do
for these feelings I have,
started
with simple affection...
with the passing of days,
they grew...
now I feel the beauty in life
with goose-bumps and butterflies
at the mere thought of you
I was floored by our connection
a feeling that I just couldn't ignore
Am I a fool?
for feeling this way from something so new?
though taken by surprise
and blown off my feet
this is the secret I keep
I lay on the ground
and I stare into space
Thinking of you with
the biggest smile on my face
I end this poem with one line
that you must have known
but I could never speak...
"I Love You"!!!
way more than any poem can show. ♥
It could only be with you
my heart longs to be lost
in your beautiful eyes
that seem to rival the bluest of skies
hesitant to let you know how I really feel
...the love I have for you
and how those feelings feel so real
worried about your reaction and
what you would say
or what you would do
for these feelings I have,
started
with simple affection...
with the passing of days,
they grew...
now I feel the beauty in life
with goose-bumps and butterflies
at the mere thought of you
I was floored by our connection
a feeling that I just couldn't ignore
Am I a fool?
for feeling this way from something so new?
though taken by surprise
and blown off my feet
this is the secret I keep
I lay on the ground
and I stare into space
Thinking of you with
the biggest smile on my face
I end this poem with one line
that you must have known
but I could never speak...
"I Love You"!!!
way more than any poem can show. ♥
Published 11th Jan 2015
| Edited 7th Sep 2015
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11th Jan 2015 11:09pm
M such a tender, lovely write sounds like you have a beautiful lady there :) with love Crim
Thank you Crim... I guess its more like a "school yard crush" hahaha.. but I always love your comments ;) cheers!!
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12th Jan 2015 1:44am
Awwwe. I love you too. Let's get married! Just kidding. :) Beautiful write, as always.
12th Jan 2015 1:57am
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12th Jan 2015 9:29am
You are not a fool for admiring your feelings! You are a strong and honest mind and I'm sure she will be delighted..you never know unless you try my friend :) beautiful poem
13th Jan 2015 12:13pm
17th Jul 2015 6:16pm
That's it, I am pure mushy now lol. Such a beautiful declaration of you.
