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Garden Paths

I wanna know
how did it feel for you
take me to the beginning
not that moment
you know
that moment..
when desire be too deep
with rivers overflowing
love dams bursting
the nights darkness
like the opera
the phantoms death
holding tightly
me and you singing
beyond
The point of no return...

No no no not that special never to be forgotten moment
sigh
another time though yes please..
now.. where was I
yes, how did you feel with your discovery
was it polite, courteous and true  
it didn't just barge it's way inside
did it knock and wait patiently when
you said,  I'll just be a minute.. as you proceeded
to barricade the door with emotional reasoning,
was it already inside, handing you the chairs and advice
understanding, did it make you pause.. giggle
and smile when you thought about it
are you really that happy
happy as you dreamed you'd be before love came
travelling along your garden path.
Written by Lookawaynow (Rose)
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