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Unfinished Tales (Mid Lib Pt 3)
I should've known this book was not complete
There is nothing tragic as leaving tales
unfinished
The truth is, no shelve has this book
I'm sorry for arousing myself on suspence
At least I'm in the air suspended by the little I
learned
There is nothing tragic as leaving tales
unfinished
The truth is, no shelve has this book
I'm sorry for arousing myself on suspence
At least I'm in the air suspended by the little I
learned
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re: Re: Unfinished Tales (Mid Lib Pt 3)
11th Jan 2015 5:21pm
Re: Unfinished Tales (Mid Lib Pt 3)
Anonymous
11th Jan 2015 5:36pm
"At least I'm in the air suspended by the little I
learnt. "
I guess it was an erotic lesson? ;)
"learned" is the correct word, dear. Holly says so. :)
learnt. "
I guess it was an erotic lesson? ;)
"learned" is the correct word, dear. Holly says so. :)

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re: Re: Unfinished Tales (Mid Lib Pt 3)
Oh gosh... I wish I had you as a word Check on all mt grammatical errors...
thenxLoads, I appreciate your read, comment and correction.....#Noted
what's the difference?
I thought, they meant same thing
learnt -British
learned-American.....
thenxLoads, I appreciate your read, comment and correction.....#Noted
what's the difference?
I thought, they meant same thing
learnt -British
learned-American.....
re: re: Re: Unfinished Tales (Mid Lib Pt 3)
Anonymous
11th Jan 2015 8:48pm
Learned is the more common past tense and past participle of the verb learn. Learnt is a variant especially common outside North America. In British writing, for instance, it appears about once for every three instances of learned. In the U.S. and Canada, meanwhile, learnt appears only once for approximately every 500 instances of learned, and it’s generally considered colloquial.
So it's not wrong to use it as you have...just less common. Try not to listen too hard to Peter Pan's critique. He's full of peanut butter. ha.
So it's not wrong to use it as you have...just less common. Try not to listen too hard to Peter Pan's critique. He's full of peanut butter. ha.

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Anonymous
11th Jan 2015 8:51pm
Oh shut up, Holly, you troll. lol.

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Re: Unfinished Tales (Mid Lib Pt 3)
12th Jan 2015 11:44pm
Good write bud, it is impressive how you can take a short poem and say so much in it, hats off to you once again my friend.
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re: Re: Unfinished Tales (Mid Lib Pt 3)
13th Jan 2015 7:01am
Woah, thenxloads for your comment, I'm getting a Swollen head, lols....
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