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Missing You Last Night
My divine Muse
who I've placed
on the alter of my heart
where have you gone?
I'm blue without you
my mind paces leaving holes
in the remnants of my soul
kudzu vines choke
my inner being
leaving me numb
I wash up on the shore
of empty thought
missing you
grasping for the words to free me
but like a puff of smoke
they vanish into the ether
I try to embrace you
though you have many lovers
who you bless with visions
kiss my soul and fill it with meaning
don't leave me in this lonely place broken
utter your sweet words of wisdom
while I quietly listen
soaking in your giving rays
I kiss your lips gently
tell you you're worth the waiting
who I've placed
on the alter of my heart
where have you gone?
I'm blue without you
my mind paces leaving holes
in the remnants of my soul
kudzu vines choke
my inner being
leaving me numb
I wash up on the shore
of empty thought
missing you
grasping for the words to free me
but like a puff of smoke
they vanish into the ether
I try to embrace you
though you have many lovers
who you bless with visions
kiss my soul and fill it with meaning
don't leave me in this lonely place broken
utter your sweet words of wisdom
while I quietly listen
soaking in your giving rays
I kiss your lips gently
tell you you're worth the waiting
Published 7th Jan 2015
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Anonymous
7th Jan 2015 5:38pm
Ok beautiful lady, you have me here wet but this time on my cheeks. I love you so much, I would never abandon you my most precious of jewels. You are my strength and my light. You give me reason and inspiration. Goddess blessing to you my sister. Holding your head against my beating heart ❤️
7th Jan 2015 5:46pm
I feel your love deeply lovely one and it's returned three fold.. I was just missing you with your fierce yet tender spirit.. I'm happy this touched your heart because it came from mine.. love Brenda :)
7th Jan 2015 9:37pm
7th Jan 2015 6:21pm
A great Ode between Sisters
in Crime and Soul...
Wiccan Thelma & Louise.
Pan
in Crime and Soul...
Wiccan Thelma & Louise.
Pan
7th Jan 2015 9:35pm
thank you Pan I delight in the idea of a Wiccan Thelma and Louise ;) with love Brenda
7th Jan 2015 7:20pm
Beautiful, and so full of eager passion. It's a wondrous thing you speak of - through an envious heart it's loved deeply. - blessed be, blue angel
7th Jan 2015 9:36pm
7th Jan 2015 8:32pm
You're a wonderful friend to your Muse, and an inspiration to many others. It's a joy to have you around, Lady Crim.
7th Jan 2015 9:37pm
she is a wonderful friend to me Sir Crow thank you as you are as well with love Crim
7th Jan 2015 11:28pm
simply beautiful :-)
"I wash up on the shore
of empty thought
missing you"
absolutely lovely :-)
8th Jan 2015 7:29am
8th Jan 2015 2:02am
8th Jan 2015 7:29am
8th Jan 2015 10:32am
kudzu vines choke
my inner being
leaving me numb
i love the word play in this stanza, clever stuff Crimsin, a beautiful piece of yearning appreciation
my inner being
leaving me numb
i love the word play in this stanza, clever stuff Crimsin, a beautiful piece of yearning appreciation
8th Jan 2015 2:22pm
9th Jan 2015 5:42am
What a tribute indeed beautifully said crim!!
I must say i feel the same way others feel about you, i adore you Crim..
luv
Zazzles
I must say i feel the same way others feel about you, i adore you Crim..
luv
Zazzles
9th Jan 2015 5:03pm
thank you Zazzles for such a beautifully tender comment.. I adore your heart with love Brenda
10th Jan 2015 2:15am
Sexy Crim.......this is awesome......luv reading you......talent beyond words......xo :)
10th Jan 2015 5:38pm
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