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Playdates
I would have acted out of character
if I could have
of the playdates we organise
now don't get missguided,
I see them as daring
quite adventurous
fulfilling
times pretending to be strangers
On wishing we were strangers again
if just for the briefest of moments
I'd have acted out of character
and you'd have taken me
I'd have felt your warmth
this much I now know to be true.
if I could have
of the playdates we organise
now don't get missguided,
I see them as daring
quite adventurous
fulfilling
times pretending to be strangers
On wishing we were strangers again
if just for the briefest of moments
I'd have acted out of character
and you'd have taken me
I'd have felt your warmth
this much I now know to be true.
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Re: Playdates
4th Jan 2015 7:19am
re: Re: Playdates
4th Jan 2015 7:22am
Playdates are creative within a relationship most definatly. XD
not sure if flings solve anything really in my opinion
thanks for commenting EM
not sure if flings solve anything really in my opinion
thanks for commenting EM
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4th Jan 2015 7:35am
yeah agree totally ;)
even more adventurous within a relationship
keeps the flame burning hot hehe
even more adventurous within a relationship
keeps the flame burning hot hehe
Re: Playdates
4th Jan 2015 7:43am
"roll play" ... Is that like the naughty baker sticks the baguette in the oven to get it hot ... then buttered and devoured ... All the while kneading the sweet buns ?
I'm more of a Red Riding Hood - Big Bad Wolf fan ... go figure.
Great lesson for the indecisive in this Rose.
I'm more of a Red Riding Hood - Big Bad Wolf fan ... go figure.
Great lesson for the indecisive in this Rose.
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re: Re: Playdates
many adventures learned from role play
makes couples closer without a doubt LSP
makes couples closer without a doubt LSP
Re: Playdates
4th Jan 2015 4:15pm
Role playing (or roll playing) can be great fun. Spell check: The ifs in lines ten and eleven should probably be ofs. Of moments and of character. Just a detail. Correct me of I'm wrong.
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re: Re: Playdates
4th Jan 2015 4:49pm
thank you Crow for my spelling issues hehe
I think I have corrected them now XD
don't hesitate to point out future mistakes
I often don't proof read in the early hours
I think I have corrected them now XD
don't hesitate to point out future mistakes
I often don't proof read in the early hours
Re: Playdates
4th Jan 2015 9:14pm
I think the roll-play thing was my fault, lol. Sounds sexy though. I’m blaming my phone on this one.
Now i'm kind of hungry :-)
Now i'm kind of hungry :-)
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re: Re: Playdates
4th Jan 2015 9:24pm
lol I just realised!
I was curious as to why Mr Crow was saying "roll" play
to the point of me re reading my scribe
hehe was a head scratching moment
I was curious as to why Mr Crow was saying "roll" play
to the point of me re reading my scribe
hehe was a head scratching moment
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4th Jan 2015 9:30pm