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Questioning Heaven
FABLES OF THE ETERNAL WATCHER
I can hear their voices
A million souls crying out
In unison for attention
In truth full of doubt
Questioning Heaven
In a quest for answers
Prototypes of this age
Unfinished and unprepared
For the dark path that lies ahead
Separate pain shared
Those pleading voices
Singing with their praises
Erebus, Metztli
Here our voices
Summanus, Chandra
Here our calls!
Yes, I have the power
To answer all your prayers
From the religious zealots
To the sooth sayers
Leveling Heaven
In pure cleansing fires
Refuse to heed your call
You are nothing in eons
Past the flow in rivers of time
Lost pantheons
Those failing kingdoms
Screaming with their curses
Anubis, Hodr
Hear our curses
Chernobog, Setesh
Hear our calls!
Why have you forsaken us
In perpetual darkness,
When the shadows come calling
In perpetual madness?
I thrive on suffering
In endless woes of despair
Sacrifices made of warm blood
Is the price to bare
Savoring Heaven
Is earned with trials of hate
Primordial darkness
Woven in a sea of stars
Careless of the hearts of mortals
Since first tears were wrought
In lasting twilight
I watch with empty eyes
I can hear their voices
A million souls crying out
In unison for attention
In truth full of doubt
Questioning Heaven
In a quest for answers
Prototypes of this age
Unfinished and unprepared
For the dark path that lies ahead
Separate pain shared
Those pleading voices
Singing with their praises
Erebus, Metztli
Here our voices
Summanus, Chandra
Here our calls!
Yes, I have the power
To answer all your prayers
From the religious zealots
To the sooth sayers
Leveling Heaven
In pure cleansing fires
Refuse to heed your call
You are nothing in eons
Past the flow in rivers of time
Lost pantheons
Those failing kingdoms
Screaming with their curses
Anubis, Hodr
Hear our curses
Chernobog, Setesh
Hear our calls!
Why have you forsaken us
In perpetual darkness,
When the shadows come calling
In perpetual madness?
I thrive on suffering
In endless woes of despair
Sacrifices made of warm blood
Is the price to bare
Savoring Heaven
Is earned with trials of hate
Primordial darkness
Woven in a sea of stars
Careless of the hearts of mortals
Since first tears were wrought
In lasting twilight
I watch with empty eyes
Published 3rd Jan 2015
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3rd Jan 2015 9:23pm
4th Jan 2015 1:51am
4th Jan 2015 2:40pm
Another great eye-opening
write against all the fables.
To many questions on the subject.
And, that is a something to think
about: all the questions are
subjective.
Good presentation... Pan
write against all the fables.
To many questions on the subject.
And, that is a something to think
about: all the questions are
subjective.
Good presentation... Pan
4th Jan 2015 8:18pm
Thanks. I'm writing this little series to show eternity through a forgotten god's eyes and his reasons to be the way he is.
4th Jan 2015 11:44pm
Hmmh, this sounds very
interesting Hades.
Inserting Yourself into
the protagonists Psyche
and His subjective reactions;
Maybe?
I'm intrigued though... Pan
interesting Hades.
Inserting Yourself into
the protagonists Psyche
and His subjective reactions;
Maybe?
I'm intrigued though... Pan
5th Jan 2015 6:32am
23rd Apr 2015 00:18am
A very interesting and well written poem. I'm definitely am reading more of your works
23rd Apr 2015 2:20am
