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RaZors
Your words are like razors
they hurt so bad
You laugh at my pain
like it's some new fad
My tears they fall
down like rain
The twinkle they give
is what keeps me sane
they hurt so bad
You laugh at my pain
like it's some new fad
My tears they fall
down like rain
The twinkle they give
is what keeps me sane
Published 2nd May 2011
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2nd May 2011 2:38pm
2nd May 2011 2:39pm
2nd May 2011 2:39pm
this poem is razor sharp (pardon the pun)
the eight lines tell a much longer story.
fair play!!
nice one!!
the eight lines tell a much longer story.
fair play!!
nice one!!
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