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Remember Me
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at the field's end
she leaves him again
for the one who owns
the rings on her finger
she says she will be back
with her backpack
she will leave with him
for any places unknown
he waits behind the tree
his heart swelling with desire
and love for his darling
someone's wife someone's mother
in the distance a gunshot
nothing is heard again
he has been there three days
tears swollen eyes
broken heart in pieces
as he slowly returns to nature.
*this poem was entered in a competition here. Thank you for reading.*
at the field's end
she leaves him again
for the one who owns
the rings on her finger
she says she will be back
with her backpack
she will leave with him
for any places unknown
he waits behind the tree
his heart swelling with desire
and love for his darling
someone's wife someone's mother
in the distance a gunshot
nothing is heard again
he has been there three days
tears swollen eyes
broken heart in pieces
as he slowly returns to nature.
*this poem was entered in a competition here. Thank you for reading.*
Published 31st Dec 2014
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5th Jan 2015 12:00pm
Love this-Haunting-and delicious pain!!!
Good pair with this tune as well-Excellent Ink Dear Grace!!!
Good pair with this tune as well-Excellent Ink Dear Grace!!!
5th Jan 2015 1:37pm
If pain was delicious I would have it with coffee:) haunting is another matter though. Thanks for reading me as always Soul. You are much appreciated.
