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Snatch

Make me forget.
Camouflage your lies
Contrive your caresses.
I don�t care. �
Reach underneath, and twist my heart,
If you�re able. �
Make me forget
The way you once forgot me. �
Remember;
I�m dangerous. �
The contour of my hips that
Fold into
Into a dark and seedy pendulum
The sharp lips of a succubus
Pink, flushing, cruel,
Fallacious imp. �
Are you ready? �
I will swallow you
I will claw you
I will absorb your body
Until you ache like a wounded bird. � �

Written by Virginiapetal

Published 30th Dec 2014

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Re: Snatch

crowfly

30th Dec 2014 8:31pm

Just the succubus I need. I'm aching like a wounded crow. I don't see how whoever you're addressing could forget about you. God help them if they have. You're a truly dangerous lady, and a really fine poet. This poem is both a threat and a turn on. Great work.

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30th Dec 2014 8:39pm

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Re: Snatch

EM20XX (Just a Puppet)

30th Dec 2014 8:50pm

Those damn succubuses. Thanks for share :-) lovely read indeed

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Re: Snatch

sammy4444

30th Dec 2014 9:03pm

Hmmm. Forgetting is easy for a moment or two, but the way your words move into each other with such sensuality and dark grace, I doubt you are very forgettable. Beautiful imagery, dangerous succubus clawing and consuming. So violent and...alive! Primal. I like this write a lot.