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Contemplations Of Rage
I
Can feel the core of my soul
moving...and brewing...
As aggravations continue stewing
Inside the cauldron of my consciousness
I can feel pressure fissures breaking
through my emotional walls...
Im sending out telepathic signals
For Help...yet noone hears my call
I can feel it...I'm gonna blow
and I know this wont be good
SO I'm writing...
I am writing so I don't lash out
I am writing so I don't pass out
I am writing so I keep myself in check
Because I feel like a cruise ship
Thats about to be wrecked...
As steam now blows
from the crest of my mind...
I let hot tears fall
I am TRYING to bide my time
To let these tumultuous emotions
Blow over me...
Before this HUrricane of Hurt
Blows straight thru me
There is nothing I can do now
Sometimes... Being angry
Is the Most suitable choice...
In this case anyway...
Some days... I wish I could feel
something besides my anger...
Angry winds seem to parch & crack the soul
Yet here I stand
with no soothing balm in sight
Maybe Today...
I better just keep my damn mouth shut...
Or Risk screaming supersonicly and
Destroying...
The entire world around me...
Key words being around me
Cause once its shattered
it will only leave me
Without the shelter of pleasant thoughts
Yet some days...
I feel like it's my God Given right
To Raise a little Hell...
Yet...
I am still going to try not
To Let Rage... Turn the next page
In My Life... Today.
Can feel the core of my soul
moving...and brewing...
As aggravations continue stewing
Inside the cauldron of my consciousness
I can feel pressure fissures breaking
through my emotional walls...
Im sending out telepathic signals
For Help...yet noone hears my call
I can feel it...I'm gonna blow
and I know this wont be good
SO I'm writing...
I am writing so I don't lash out
I am writing so I don't pass out
I am writing so I keep myself in check
Because I feel like a cruise ship
Thats about to be wrecked...
As steam now blows
from the crest of my mind...
I let hot tears fall
I am TRYING to bide my time
To let these tumultuous emotions
Blow over me...
Before this HUrricane of Hurt
Blows straight thru me
There is nothing I can do now
Sometimes... Being angry
Is the Most suitable choice...
In this case anyway...
Some days... I wish I could feel
something besides my anger...
Angry winds seem to parch & crack the soul
Yet here I stand
with no soothing balm in sight
Maybe Today...
I better just keep my damn mouth shut...
Or Risk screaming supersonicly and
Destroying...
The entire world around me...
Key words being around me
Cause once its shattered
it will only leave me
Without the shelter of pleasant thoughts
Yet some days...
I feel like it's my God Given right
To Raise a little Hell...
Yet...
I am still going to try not
To Let Rage... Turn the next page
In My Life... Today.
Published 29th Dec 2014
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29th Dec 2014 1:40pm
Sometimes we know nothing else than to speak our minds, make our point known and hold nothing back...but depending on where and when, you must pick and choose your battles.
I love how you spill your words on the page and let it all out through your pen ; )
Breathe mama
I love how you spill your words on the page and let it all out through your pen ; )
Breathe mama
29th Dec 2014 1:56pm
thank you so much !
I am really going thru something right now...
not sure what to do but your words are helpful... and appreciated
XOXO
Fire
I am really going thru something right now...
not sure what to do but your words are helpful... and appreciated
XOXO
Fire
Anonymous
29th Dec 2014 2:14pm
This is amazing! My favourite ink of yours...I feel this to my very core, the way u express, how u are so desperately trying yet no one can see how fucking hard it all is. I'm so fucking with u on this..outstanding ink beautiful lady. Hang in there..I hear your call xx
31st Dec 2014 3:12pm
Beautiful Fire write out you rage and pain.. you are heard, understood and loved.. with love Crim
31st Dec 2014 3:21pm
30th Dec 2014 1:21am
"I am writing so I don't lash out
I am writing so I don't pass out
I am writing so I keep myself in check"
I love the whole poem despite the fact there is a lot of pain and struggle there.
I am the wrong person to take advice from - I am an old cynic and my answer to everything is "Come out swinging"
fantastic write :-)
Have a Happy New Year ( if possible)
I am writing so I don't pass out
I am writing so I keep myself in check"
I love the whole poem despite the fact there is a lot of pain and struggle there.
I am the wrong person to take advice from - I am an old cynic and my answer to everything is "Come out swinging"
fantastic write :-)
Have a Happy New Year ( if possible)
31st Dec 2014 3:22pm
LOL Dave! You are so funny and Yes it will be a Happy New Year I refuse to speak negativity over my life
XOXO
Fire
XOXO
Fire
30th Dec 2014 7:29pm
"I am writing so I don't lash out
I am writing so I don't pass out
I am writing so I keep myself in check
Because I feel like a cruise ship
Thats about to be wrecked..."
wow oh wow ...get outta my head!!felt these words as if they were my very own....Phenomenally Penned Fire..enjoyed as always!!!
I am writing so I don't pass out
I am writing so I keep myself in check
Because I feel like a cruise ship
Thats about to be wrecked..."
wow oh wow ...get outta my head!!felt these words as if they were my very own....Phenomenally Penned Fire..enjoyed as always!!!
31st Dec 2014 3:22pm
3rd Jan 2015 3:42pm
Some days just require a release, lest that volcano become something that could end all days. Restraint and release are two sides of the same coin. Fierce write, Soul Sister!
