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"Underneath"
Tis Christmas morn, all quiet as can be
Then what to my wondering eyes should I see
MILF and moist cookie underneath the tree
Spread upon a blanket, waiting just for me
:)~~
Merry Christmas!
*December 25, 2014*
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Re: "Underneath"
Anonymous
25th Dec 2014 10:18pm
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26th Dec 2014 11:16pm
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26th Dec 2014 11:17pm
Re: "Underneath"
26th Dec 2014 00:49am
Whohoo EV.......Santa was good to you......told you us on the naughty list still got presents....LOL!!! Xo :)
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re: Re: "Underneath"
26th Dec 2014 11:20pm
Santa is good to all the naughty boys and girls.
You already know this, ES. :D
Thank you. :)
xo
You already know this, ES. :D
Thank you. :)
xo
Re: "Underneath"
26th Dec 2014 3:58am
daaamn the sound of MILF is a popular boyhood dream, we smile from the eyes n D.heads nods.
milf...moist cookie...i can literally smell it.
That tree should be a mistle toe...yuuuhuuu
No more kisses under...cookies under the tree...
Ilove eet
milf...moist cookie...i can literally smell it.
That tree should be a mistle toe...yuuuhuuu
No more kisses under...cookies under the tree...
Ilove eet
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re: Re: "Underneath"
26th Dec 2014 11:27pm
I appreciate you sharing the positive reaction, sukre.
Thank you for the selection to your RL.
I'm liking the idea of a mistletoe tree. :)
Thank you for the selection to your RL.
I'm liking the idea of a mistletoe tree. :)
Re: "Underneath"
26th Dec 2014 6:14am
Not bad it was ok, but it needed some work.
Other than that not that bad and it was ok.
Other than that not that bad and it was ok.
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re: Re: "Underneath"
26th Dec 2014 11:31pm
"Not bad" and "ok" are better than bad, and not ok. :)
Thanks for the comments, Ms RJ.
Thanks for the comments, Ms RJ.
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26th Dec 2014 11:51pm
Your welcome Vegas, I'll be sure to give you my honest and brutal opinion for your work :)
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Re: "Underneath"
26th Dec 2014 5:12pm
The title made me half nervous and half excited...lol
Muy Caliente
You must have been on the good list this year ; )
Muy Caliente
You must have been on the good list this year ; )
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LOL! I didn't think of that, until now. :D
"Half nervous and half excited" sounds a lot
like anticipation. ;) Just my humble opinion. :)
Pleased to know you think it, very hot.
Thank you, Ms Lena!
I'm on the, "It's Good To Be Naughty List." :D
"Half nervous and half excited" sounds a lot
like anticipation. ;) Just my humble opinion. :)
Pleased to know you think it, very hot.
Thank you, Ms Lena!
I'm on the, "It's Good To Be Naughty List." :D