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Erotic Haiku Collection #1
Despite your own views
I think you are mad sexy
Come to bed early
I can't help myself
Whenever you are naked
I have to touch you
When inside of you
It is barely close enough
Lost in your essence
Merry Christmas ya'll
I think you are mad sexy
Come to bed early
I can't help myself
Whenever you are naked
I have to touch you
When inside of you
It is barely close enough
Lost in your essence
Merry Christmas ya'll
Published 25th Dec 2014
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25th Dec 2014 11:09am
I like the third one best. "Lost in your essence" is a beautiful line. The second one is sexy but engagingly polite. And the first acknowledges her own views and thus shows respect. Nevertheless, she's mad sexy, so how can you resist? I seem to be going in reverse. Fine job, Frank, and Merry Christmas.
26th Dec 2014 9:57am
All shots hit their mark Crowfly! Your reflection and insight is amazing.
I do really wish she would come to bed earlier more often LOL!
I hope you have had a good Christmas - thank you for your comments.
I do really wish she would come to bed earlier more often LOL!
I hope you have had a good Christmas - thank you for your comments.
25th Dec 2014 1:28pm
26th Dec 2014 9:54am
Anonymous
25th Dec 2014 6:44pm
i'm enjoying the haiku as of late. especially if they are erotic. nice!
happy christmas!
happy christmas!
26th Dec 2014 9:53am
Glad you enjoyed Minerva - they are kind of like poetry take-out (or take-away as we call it here Oz). Fast food tasty!
Merry Christmas to you as well
Merry Christmas to you as well
Anonymous
28th Dec 2014 2:49am
i just had to come back and read these again. i love the line /it is barely close enough/
so good. so very good and spot on.
so good. so very good and spot on.
