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Love
Thimble Feelings
poured into a pitcher
filled with love;
This is not a jargon
but mundane feelings
that they call love;
True love
is like parallel lines
rather one-sided love.
poured into a pitcher
filled with love;
This is not a jargon
but mundane feelings
that they call love;
True love
is like parallel lines
rather one-sided love.
Published 29th Apr 2011
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Sometimes, I suppose, I agree. I like the cynical way with this - it floats like cigarette smoke in clean air.
29th Apr 2011 1:10pm
i dont know which one is the smoke, whether love or the external air...but certainly I feel this way, cynical, very cynical. Thanx LA.
29th Apr 2011 4:43pm
Anonymous
30th Apr 2011 12:13pm
continues to intrigue me.
Enjoyable and thought provoking -
Best,
S
Enjoyable and thought provoking -
Best,
S
30th Apr 2011 12:16pm
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