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Satin
Slipping back
virginal white
satin seductiveness.
Grasped by the enthusiasm
of idyllic romantic notions
to surrendering situations.
I give up my all
my love
It's yours.
Published 18th Dec 2014
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18th Dec 2014 8:40pm
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18th Dec 2014 8:53pm
Anonymous
18th Dec 2014 9:37pm
Rose,
"Grasped by the enthusiasm" Love that line!
tornado
"Grasped by the enthusiasm" Love that line!
tornado
18th Dec 2014 9:38pm
19th Dec 2014 5:40am
18th Dec 2014 10:06pm
I hope those "surrendering situations" were tender, and things went as smoothly as "Satin" might indicate. I enjoy your idyll thoughts.
19th Dec 2014 5:42am
19th Dec 2014 2:45am
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