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Open Me
I give to you Sir
The gift of me
More everyday
All for your pure enjoyment
Accept me openly
Just how I this gift is meant
Take full advantage lover
Getting the most out of our stolen moments
Don't hold anything back
I'm not afraid or nervous
I totally submit to you
You have my complete trust
Tell me what you want
I'll make your wishes come true
I want you pleased like never before
Please allow me to give that to you
Find endless erotic pleasure in me
You.will never here "No" escape my lips
Take me on a carnal adventure
It all.begins once you unwrap your gift
Come on Sir...
Don't you want to see underneath
Release me from the bindings of my clothes
All that lies beneath is yours
The gift of me
More everyday
All for your pure enjoyment
Accept me openly
Just how I this gift is meant
Take full advantage lover
Getting the most out of our stolen moments
Don't hold anything back
I'm not afraid or nervous
I totally submit to you
You have my complete trust
Tell me what you want
I'll make your wishes come true
I want you pleased like never before
Please allow me to give that to you
Find endless erotic pleasure in me
You.will never here "No" escape my lips
Take me on a carnal adventure
It all.begins once you unwrap your gift
Come on Sir...
Don't you want to see underneath
Release me from the bindings of my clothes
All that lies beneath is yours
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Re: Open Me
11th Dec 2014 8:06pm
Wow! Thanks for the generosity, that "endless erotic pleasure." You are truly gifted, sweet Belle.
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re: Re: Open Me
11th Dec 2014 8:16pm
Well ty Crow
Glad u enjoy the way I share my feelings on the screen
I hold nothing back
When I'm inspired to take out my pen
Glad u enjoy the way I share my feelings on the screen
I hold nothing back
When I'm inspired to take out my pen
Re: Open Me
11th Dec 2014 8:33pm
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12th Dec 2014 1:23pm
Re: Open Me
11th Dec 2014 11:36pm
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12th Dec 2014 1:26pm
Sorry to disappoint....
Hope my lil write was good enough to stand on its own merits darlin
Nice to know my normal choices of artwork is being missed
Thanks for the read
Hope my lil write was good enough to stand on its own merits darlin
Nice to know my normal choices of artwork is being missed
Thanks for the read
Re: Open Me
12th Dec 2014 1:42am
Lmao at PoetSpeak becuz shit I wanted to see sonething too! lol... All I got is mmmmm yea lol
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re: Re: Open Me
12th Dec 2014 9:40pm
So PM ur missing choices n pics too huh? All I can do is apologize. I'm having a problem getting pics to post.
Hopefully I'll figure out what's wrong zoom darlin
Hopefully I'll figure out what's wrong zoom darlin
Re: Open Me
12th Dec 2014 6:06am
re: Re: Open Me
12th Dec 2014 9:43pm
Thanx so much Mr Feddeler
R u missing the pics as well? Hahaha
Personally I am too. The right artwork
can put a poem on a whole other level
As u sir well know
R u missing the pics as well? Hahaha
Personally I am too. The right artwork
can put a poem on a whole other level
As u sir well know
Re: Open Me
12th Dec 2014 5:06pm
Offering your all to love...that's a beautiful thing. Wonderful piece Belle.
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12th Dec 2014 9:44pm
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12th Dec 2014 8:49pm
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12th Dec 2014 9:45pm
Re: Open Me
12th Dec 2014 11:12pm
Definitely a valuable gift for the reader, Ms Belle.
Primal, passionate desire penned herein.
Excellent!
Primal, passionate desire penned herein.
Excellent!
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Re: Open Me
16th Dec 2014 4:45pm