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Crossing the Heart
If pain can be measured by the bushels
no gurney sacks would be empty
and stacked against the fence
that she set up around her heart
if the number of time he left
can be counted on the fingers
of both hands and all her toes
more fingers should be grown
why is she still waiting for him
one day he will no longer need her
love will have died a natural death
she is still watering her hopes
She knows love will surely die
she sighs remembering his goodbye
the dusts in the air shifts
she smiles as her tears flow
Again
At least she's still feeling.
no gurney sacks would be empty
and stacked against the fence
that she set up around her heart
if the number of time he left
can be counted on the fingers
of both hands and all her toes
more fingers should be grown
why is she still waiting for him
one day he will no longer need her
love will have died a natural death
she is still watering her hopes
She knows love will surely die
she sighs remembering his goodbye
the dusts in the air shifts
she smiles as her tears flow
Again
At least she's still feeling.
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8th Dec 2014 4:16pm
I can relate to her pains;wishful thinking can't sweep reality away. Maybe she must move on and leave the past behind,but as with humans,some feelings just don't die. Once again this is beautifully written Grace,well done.
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8th Dec 2014 5:19pm
Dustyjjewels:)...thank you for reading. I agree she should move on but affairs of the heart. Its so difficult to tend to.
Re: Crossing the Heart
8th Dec 2014 4:24pm
This shows courage. "Love will surely die." Maybe so, but, for her, it will probably be reborn. "At least she's still feeling." Beautiful job, Grace.
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8th Dec 2014 5:23pm
To hope that love lives on is courage for one can be disappointed. But it can also be folly as one could move on and love again.:) Crowfly thanks for reading.
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8th Dec 2014 4:45pm
I don't believe love ever dies, but some people do their damnedest to kill it. I have love in my heart for girls I have not seen in 35 years or more. But I doubt they ever think of me... your pain is deeply relatable... jj
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8th Dec 2014 5:28pm
Enduring love, Poetryman, is so romantic and coveted by most. Yet love can be nostalgia of what was and wistfulness for what if. Love lives in us...perhaps only the target differs. Thanks for reading me.:) Appreciated as always.
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Anonymous
8th Dec 2014 7:46pm
Such a delightful piece,dear Grace...
Kind of recognizing the true romantic in you
Kind of recognizing the true romantic in you
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