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1st Dec 2014 9:40am
I like your haiku haunt... Very edgy and as my fiancé would say, it has that 'bite at the end'.
"Take his or give mine"....
I'm not usually a big fan of haiku, but these break the tradition of mother nature poems and turns to human nature.
Good job.
"Take his or give mine"....
I'm not usually a big fan of haiku, but these break the tradition of mother nature poems and turns to human nature.
Good job.
1st Dec 2014 11:23am
Thank you for the read and comment, and I'm happy you can feel "the bite" of these short bursts I put out ...
... The exercise in writing them helps me be more selective with word choices for larger writes. I'm in a writing comp outside of DUP and I'll know by Friday if the practice paid off ...
... Again many thanks.
... The exercise in writing them helps me be more selective with word choices for larger writes. I'm in a writing comp outside of DUP and I'll know by Friday if the practice paid off ...
... Again many thanks.
6th Dec 2014 9:59pm
7th Dec 2014 11:57am
So very true ... I was just listening to a commentator talk about the Tyson vs. Spinks fight ... The look in Spinks eyes before the first bell rang told you he was beaten ... the short match was a formality at that point
