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Chomsky
I see you living there
in your comfortable illusion
so please forgive
my awful intrusion
but I felt as though
you should know
the life you live
is just a delusion.
in your comfortable illusion
so please forgive
my awful intrusion
but I felt as though
you should know
the life you live
is just a delusion.
Published 26th Apr 2011
| Edited 4th Apr 2015
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28th Apr 2011 00:30am
this is an awesome poem man really short but its still good. would you mind if i wrote it down in a notebook i keep all my favorite poems in?
17th May 2011 9:19pm
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Anonymous
1st May 2014 3:25am
Few words that speak volumes. Now this is great shit, brother. Great shit.
4th Apr 2015 7:28pm
Yups... some people need a reality check.
then again, society refuses the truth,
because they don't want their delusions destroyed.
Great Piece my friend.
Darker.
then again, society refuses the truth,
because they don't want their delusions destroyed.
Great Piece my friend.
Darker.
13th Jan 2020 8:05pm
I have read all your posts and have to say you have won the girls hearts I find your work to be more than skin deep beautifully written with brevity it's not easy to write a complete thought with brevity but you do it well
13th Jan 2020 9:06pm
and the ability to write at length without losing the reader is much more difficult and something you are fantastic at. Thank you
