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Living room - extended version
Ten past six a.m.
having breakfast
with people never invited
coffee in my left hand, croissant in my right
the train is arriving at
platform 6
having breakfast
with people never invited
coffee in my left hand, croissant in my right
the train is arriving at
platform 6
Published 27th Nov 2014
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28th Nov 2014 9:52pm
Can imagine the train station, unknown companion, steam from your coffee mug ... Too early for my taste.
28th Nov 2014 10:46pm
Too early, indeed...but try to imagine the situation WITHOUT a cup of coffee ;-).
29th Nov 2014 4:59am
the enormous room, the crush of the crowd,
the prize of coffee & a light bread.
poetry for commuters...
the prize of coffee & a light bread.
poetry for commuters...
