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reverse aquarium

 glide, flick

green, sway
light twists

grey pebbles
down

swish

door opens

blue shirt
clump clump slippers
plink plink
coins in jar

swish, flick

bubbles
white

light swirl
swish

glide
darkness

gurgle
flick

bubbles
bubbles

door opens

clump clump
blue shirt big
up
food!

swoop, nibble
flick
nibble nibble

flick, swish

green fronds
and dark green sway
grey grey grey pebbles

glide
darkness

bubbles gurgle
light swirls

door opens

clump clump and plink
plink plink

green fronds sway

blue shirt
murmur

up, nibble
swish, flick, swoop
nibble nibble

gurgle - bubbles

glide
darkness

window opens
point light round

glide, flick
near darkness

drawer opens
rustle, light swings

glide

clunk
cupboard

shadow
THUNK!

swoop, swish
flick flick
swish
round round

round light left
right light round

flick flick
round

clink clink clink
shadow clink jar

window slither

darkness
glide
glide

still

door opens

clump and shuffle
blue shirt
clump clump clump

swish

cupboard
opens, closes

flick, glide

clump
drawer opens
closes

grey grey pebbles

clump clump
wail
wailing

swoop, swish
flick flick

wailing
blue shirt small

swish round round
flick, swoop
up

bubbles

grey pebbles
nibble

glide
grey
nibble, flick

still
darkness






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