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So I could have a favourite word.
My favourite word; Dearest
It has always been, maybe,
and I didn't know.
I had to lose you, maybe,
so I could have a favourite
word, to call and feel
my own.
† to my Dearest 22/2/2010
It has always been, maybe,
and I didn't know.
I had to lose you, maybe,
so I could have a favourite
word, to call and feel
my own.
† to my Dearest 22/2/2010
Published 26th Apr 2011
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26th Apr 2011 1:08am
26th Apr 2011 2:30am
I don't know why, but the meaning behind the words sounds like something Emily Dickinson would write about. I like it, it's short and beautiful.
26th Apr 2011 5:42am
I think I have read and myself composed a dozen of such pieces of art and what I have concluded after reading this is that this one is the most touching piece I have ever come across in my life. I can see your nanny, you, the feelings, a flashback of the last rites of my father and almost burst into crying.
26th Apr 2011 8:40am
i love your way of making me feel your poems are longer than they are. beautiful thoughts, Ophie, and nice choice of word.
Anonymous
2nd May 2011 11:58am
than 'beautiful' to correctly describe this poem
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Anonymous
2nd May 2011 12:04pm
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15th May 2011 1:43am
You have such a way of producing such weight and depth in so few words. You are a marvel to me.
