You said

Alot of truth here.

A truth that leaves us with sad smiles :-/. Thank you for the read and the comment!

Just wanted to get your imagination running wild, Gabriel :-). Always appreciate your thoughtful ccomments! ☆ﾟ.*･｡ﾟ☆ﾟ. * ･ ｡ﾟ

This is a beautiful rendition of natural harmony, the spectrum is vast, for instance the Crocodile and the Egyptian Plover. Very nice penn of the Zen Miss Chi, you've created a prism of knowing the unknowing.

You made me very happy with your lovely words, Pish :-). Thank you so much!

you want,
he needs...

an interesting
divide..:)

I wouldn't call it divide since the want and need seems to be different but all the same identical to us. Thank you, dear Paul. Honored by your comments.

I see that this happens very often. A short, but meaningful poem , I like it.

Thanks dear ladybug (may I leave out the numbers or are they important?). I'm not quite sure but think that my shorter poems are more meaningful than my longer ones :-).

Sometimes it all works out. Enjoyed.

You 'll have to be patient but in the end ... Glad you enjoyed :-).

Dig

Like

Glad.
Thanks.

Hahaha! Sweetie :-)

it's mysterious & provocative, Chi. something to ponder...

Really? That makes me absolutely glad, coming from you, John. Thank you so much! x

There's a great underlying tension here bathed in cold hard candor ... Nice piece

I think you're right. You see through the surface of my words. Glad you can do that. Thanks ...

Well I needed a release, n ur were hungry soooo...lol
Jk... Very nicely penned my sweet Chi! :)

Sexy comment, my dear Poe :-). Hunger and release are important points on our agenda of life and love.

it all comes out in the wash

Although I'd like the stain to stay ... (-‿◦☀)

Funny how that can happen. Stay strong Miss Chi, your poetry is amazing

I think the sense of this little ditty is hardly earth-shattering but for me it's just like that ...