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Ripple Effect
My thoughts
meandering
cooling
backing up
sweeping away
away
as if never a ripple felt
but they meander still
fingers wandering
twisting turning
lingering on lust
making more
thoughts
about
you
you
for breakfast.
causing
chain reactions
creating mini ripples
spreading wider till
great floods
unstoppable
washing over me.
Published 16th Nov 2014
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16th Nov 2014 9:45pm
17th Nov 2014 5:27am
Thank you Crim xD
if i get the thoughts playing fair
then whoaah! It's a flood :)
if i get the thoughts playing fair
then whoaah! It's a flood :)
17th Nov 2014 00:15am
17th Nov 2014 5:27am
17th Nov 2014 1:38am
Words of warm rolling waves breaking on the shoreline over and over from an ocean of passionate expressions that make breakfast the most important meal of the day... good morning!
17th Nov 2014 5:28am
17th Nov 2014 7:45am
"you
for breakfast"
what a great poem. what a great thought.
great work. very hot.
for breakfast"
what a great poem. what a great thought.
great work. very hot.
17th Nov 2014 8:30am
on cold mornings
it's desirable to have hot thoughts as these hehe
thanks for commenting and addy
it's desirable to have hot thoughts as these hehe
thanks for commenting and addy
17th Nov 2014 11:12am
loved it rose....what a way to start the day...breakfast of champions... ;)
like the pic....
like the pic....
17th Nov 2014 11:26am
why thankyou Kate
yes agree breakfast of champions
keeps him on his toes so to speak hehe
yes agree breakfast of champions
keeps him on his toes so to speak hehe
17th Nov 2014 11:34am
17th Nov 2014 11:38am
17th Nov 2014 4:08pm
Funny I've never seen that on the menu at Starbucks ... Just where is this marvelous coffee house?
Cool ink.
Cool ink.
17th Nov 2014 4:15pm
The coffee house of the mind LSP
that's where it be
a little shop around the corner of sexual avenue
crossing deliriously happy street
xD
that's where it be
a little shop around the corner of sexual avenue
crossing deliriously happy street
xD
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17th Nov 2014 9:30pm
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17th Nov 2014 9:34pm
It seems you can find a picture to go with any scribe written
not sure if that's a good thing but the Internet is as it is
Thankyou Gabriel
not sure if that's a good thing but the Internet is as it is
Thankyou Gabriel
