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Local Muse
She's still with me
A whisper in my ear on a silent day
Her breath stirring my hair when it's still
I look up and see her face in the clouds
Her laughter navigating when it rains
She's this kind of muse
Her hand resting on mine as I write these lines
Her warmth waiting in bed when I'm through
She becomes whole when I join her
When we slip together
When she gets the final word
Which is
Yes.
A whisper in my ear on a silent day
Her breath stirring my hair when it's still
I look up and see her face in the clouds
Her laughter navigating when it rains
She's this kind of muse
Her hand resting on mine as I write these lines
Her warmth waiting in bed when I'm through
She becomes whole when I join her
When we slip together
When she gets the final word
Which is
Yes.
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11th Nov 2014 4:16pm
Oh Crow......this is a stunning write.....just beautiful ....I'm sure her answer will be YES without hesitation,.....how can be anything after this tribute. Luv it! Xo :)
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19th Nov 2014 11:49am
When you can remember what she tasted like at her peak, you can keep the inspiration channel flowing like breathing. Glad to read my own creative process rituals elsewhere. Good write crowfly!
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