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Nature

She frolics in nature as she honors the earth, basking in the serenity that seeps into her soul.

Choosing not to worship the intangibles, or people who aren't capable of tapping into the spring that exists within themselves.

He was like the breeze that invaded her senses and flowed across every inch of her flesh, yet he couldn't find his way �through the maze within her mind to penetrate her heart.

Ever present within the tangible, infecting her heart with his subtle ways as she drifted upon his subtle but evident lies.

Sometimes, you have to let go just to hold on, so they say...

Written by shadow_starzzz

Published 11th Nov 2014

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Re: Nature

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11th Nov 2014 00:39am

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Re: Nature

sammy4444

11th Nov 2014 1:00am

"He was like the breeze that invaded her senses and flowed across every inch of her flesh, yet he couldn't find his way through the maze within her mind to penetrate her heart."
My favorite line in this. I long to be that breeze, and often feel lost in the maze, desiring to penetrate the heart. Beautiful concept. Great poem.