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What I知 Not
What I知 not
Is what you致e got
With you I just pretend
I wear a mask
Of what you ask
And try not to offend
I play the part
I never fart
With you I just comply
I致e been your dog
Your prince, your frog
Complete within the lie
I知 never bold
Do what I知 told
With you I致e never fought
Not wild or free
You created me
And what you致e got:
Is precisely what I知 not
Published 9th Nov 2014
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- Edited 10th Nov 2014 00:10am
10th Nov 2014 00:09am
I'd seriously be considering marriage guidance at the very least here, failing that, contemplating a divorce, if you're unlucky enough to be married sir. Excellent poem about a downtrodden guy who's keeping the peace.
26th Feb 2019 4:35am
10th Nov 2014 00:31am
10th Nov 2014 10:41am
so exact David...
am sure many will relate to this poem...
i know at one stage in my life i was like that to a certain extent....
but not for many many years now... :)
am sure many will relate to this poem...
i know at one stage in my life i was like that to a certain extent....
but not for many many years now... :)
10th Nov 2014 1:37pm
thank you for your kind comments:
Like many I found it easy to surrender as being the path of least resistance. works only in the short term in my experience
:-)
Like many I found it easy to surrender as being the path of least resistance. works only in the short term in my experience
:-)
10th Nov 2014 9:37pm
I'm in awe. This is magnificent. I can hear the tone of your voice as I read it. Well done :)
11th Nov 2014 4:55pm
