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Breaking point ...
People dont seem to understand I'm human,
I have feelings deep within,
But the ones who are suppost to love me ignore them,
Cast them aside,
Well, I'm close to breaking point,
Will they realise when its too late ? ,
I guess not,
Ill still be a doormat, even from my grave
I have feelings deep within,
But the ones who are suppost to love me ignore them,
Cast them aside,
Well, I'm close to breaking point,
Will they realise when its too late ? ,
I guess not,
Ill still be a doormat, even from my grave
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Re: Breaking point ...
7th Nov 2014 6:49am
Everybody's got a breaking point at some time in their life we could only handle so much....
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7th Nov 2014 8:59am
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9th Nov 2014 1:03am
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Re: Breaking point ...
9th Nov 2014 3:09am
Thank you for leaving a comment Gabriel , your comments are always appreciated c:
Re: Breaking point ...
Nobody should ever feel the way of the doormat. Write about them and put them in funny positions. Write anything. You communicate thoughts so well. You have so much goodness in the craft. :) I really can relate to this though. sadly.
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Re: Breaking point ...
9th Nov 2014 2:17pm
Aww :c thank you for leaving a comment it means alot , this feeling doesn't seem to be shifting lately :( but hopefully it will get better , hope you have a lovely day c:
Re: Breaking point ...
21st Nov 2014 10:39pm
Love your poem and recognise your struggle.
I was a door mat until I reached 52 - I hope you find a way to stop much sooner than me
:-)
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21st Nov 2014 11:05pm
Awww I'm sorry to hear that :c but thank you so much for your comment , its appreciated , hope you have a lovely day c:
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13th Dec 2014 11:17pm
Re: Breaking point ...
13th Dec 2014 11:26pm
Thank you so much , yeah , i felt pretty crappy on that day aha , it sucks :c thank you for your comment , means alot , hope you have a good day c:
Re: Breaking point ...
28th May 2015 2:47am
your no door mat but ill agree i feel like this to at times youve acknowledged a feeling that almost every one has from time to time that alone is powerful as well as your poetry
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