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mo brhón ar an farraige ~ (_with yekaterina_)
i [need to]
breathe you
like star dust fragments
colliding
on this pale horizon
leak through me ~
leach into
the barren crevices
ravaged by dust devils
choking the air
subdued by cold flame
my cerulean gaze;
you calm in the warmth
of molotov whispers
igniting spectral spirit pyres
burning haunted remnants
of carrion shroud ambitions
within this branding
a dead heart recrudescence
//
rest in
the
clusters
of
dull clasts
formed in the faults
of [my]
deformed heart
*
wisps light
the cavernous chambers
echoing memories
of
an ocean whispering
untitled love songs
//
finger shush lips
keep last breath promises
at bay for now
as though not to spoil
the realization of lost dreams
with every touch
breathe you
like star dust fragments
colliding
on this pale horizon
leak through me ~
leach into
the barren crevices
ravaged by dust devils
choking the air
subdued by cold flame
my cerulean gaze;
you calm in the warmth
of molotov whispers
igniting spectral spirit pyres
burning haunted remnants
of carrion shroud ambitions
within this branding
a dead heart recrudescence
//
rest in
the
clusters
of
dull clasts
formed in the faults
of [my]
deformed heart
*
wisps light
the cavernous chambers
echoing memories
of
an ocean whispering
untitled love songs
//
finger shush lips
keep last breath promises
at bay for now
as though not to spoil
the realization of lost dreams
with every touch
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Re: mo brhón ar an farraige ~ (_with yekaterina_)
3rd Nov 2014 7:20am
i never expected that final stanza to be so powerful, but you've always finished so strongly that it stole my breath.
so tragically appropriate but always a pleasure writing with you.
so tragically appropriate but always a pleasure writing with you.
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Re: mo brhón ar an farraige ~ (_with yekaterina_)
3rd Nov 2014 11:03pm
I find a dark, compelling romance here akin to 'Phantom of the Opera.' you two create the haunting passion sublimely...
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re: Re: mo brhón ar an farraige ~ (_with yekaterina_)
4th Nov 2014 6:15am
dark and compelling, That's very accurate, John :)...
thanks for stopping by...
thanks for stopping by...
Re: mo brhón ar an farraige ~ (_with yekaterina_)
5th Nov 2014 1:34pm
re: Re: mo brhón ar an farraige ~ (_with yekaterina_)
re: re: Re: mo brhón ar an farraige ~ (_with yekaterina_)
5th Nov 2014 2:48pm
You are welcome, it was well worth the visit and I only speak the truth my friend :)
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Re: mo brhón ar an farraige ~ (_with yekaterina_)
7th Nov 2014 10:11pm
you are a symphony together you are both talented beyond words.. with love and respect Brenda
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re: Re: mo brhón ar an farraige ~ (_with yekaterina_)
7th Nov 2014 10:21pm
Re: mo brhón ar an farraige ~ (_with yekaterina_)
30th Nov 2014 3:41pm
Lovely. Keep the over romanticism in check and give us more of the person, more of yourself, more about the how, why and when. It will add detail and depth to your work. Though don't think I don't like it because I do. It's a lot like mine when I am in that sort of place.
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re: Re: mo brhón ar an farraige ~ (_with yekaterina_)
1st Dec 2014 11:47am
Re: mo brhón ar an farraige ~ (_with yekaterina_)
Anonymous
1st Dec 2014 11:42am
This is an amazing peice! You both make powerful poetry together. Fantastic ink!

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re: Re: mo brhón ar an farraige ~ (_with yekaterina_)
1st Dec 2014 11:48am