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Help
My hearts broken , im falling to pieces
they say things happen for a reason
So lost , so stuck
mindless thoughts
run.me over with a train
Mangled brain
i need help i admit
im scared , searching
Just waiting for another hit.
they say things happen for a reason
So lost , so stuck
mindless thoughts
run.me over with a train
Mangled brain
i need help i admit
im scared , searching
Just waiting for another hit.
Published 1st Nov 2014
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1st Nov 2014 6:08pm
I really like this poem! Every word is just where it should be. Great write. The last few words are very powerful. "I need help, I admit. I'm scared, searching, just waiting for another hit". Love this piece. Keep up the good work.
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