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Numb life
Numb
Needles
the burned silver spoon
a missing shoelace
straws with burn marks
H
I
G
H
Alive
Reality
Stress
the struggle
L
I
F
E
When the numbness is done
I feel like dying
C
H
O
I
C
E
Needles
the burned silver spoon
a missing shoelace
straws with burn marks
H
I
G
H
Alive
Reality
Stress
the struggle
L
I
F
E
When the numbness is done
I feel like dying
C
H
O
I
C
E
Published 30th Oct 2014
| Edited 31st Oct 2014
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31st Oct 2014 00:41am
31st Oct 2014 00:49am
Nah I wouldn't touch anything but alcohol or weed .. And I am not suicidal at all. But it's a mood I would rather be in . But ty for the stop in
7th Nov 2014 9:39am
6th Apr 2015 5:20am
31st Oct 2014 1:00am
When the numbness dissipates reality sets in and punches you in the gut. Been there. Nice write.
31st Oct 2014 1:16am
Anonymous
31st Oct 2014 3:21am
Nice ink.. The escape, the chase.. Then boom reality.. Very well done...
Dave
Dave
1st Nov 2014 4:36am
31st Oct 2014 10:47pm
1st Nov 2014 4:35am
Don't use a permanent solution to fix a temporary problem. It is temporary, though, I understand it's hard...
Loved the write though...
Loved the write though...
1st Nov 2014 9:24pm
5th Nov 2014 1:45pm
I liked this, especially how you used shooting up to create the mood. Nice write!
9th Nov 2014 4:10am
6th Nov 2014 5:49pm
Awesomely written piece sweets!!
Adored the read!!
Never stop sweets!!
Sir Lancelott
Adored the read!!
Never stop sweets!!
Sir Lancelott
9th Nov 2014 4:10am
