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blue eyes
i see thous blue eyes fading fading
next to me holding me close to there heart
i want to be held at night by thous eyes those blue eyes
but they keep falling falling
to darkness the abyss of hell
so fuck all of this and lets move on
no more blue eyes never ever again i still might feel for them
but i don't wan them now
i got brown eyes they hold me
and make me feel good
i want the brown eyes now who cares about blue eyes
the blue eyes can kiss my ass
if i wanted thous eyes
if i wanted them i wold be i the deepest dark es place in hell
so fuck it all
next to me holding me close to there heart
i want to be held at night by thous eyes those blue eyes
but they keep falling falling
to darkness the abyss of hell
so fuck all of this and lets move on
no more blue eyes never ever again i still might feel for them
but i don't wan them now
i got brown eyes they hold me
and make me feel good
i want the brown eyes now who cares about blue eyes
the blue eyes can kiss my ass
if i wanted thous eyes
if i wanted them i wold be i the deepest dark es place in hell
so fuck it all
Published 20th Apr 2011
| Edited 23rd Apr 2011
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21st Apr 2011 10:17pm
This one requires some heavy editing. You have several misspellings (those, held, abyss) and several places with double spacing or no space between words. In addition, if these are actually lyrics, I'd suggest you change its run-on structure, break it up into a more lyrical format with lines and such.
