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Tarquin

almost afraid to breathe
you can't wake up perfection
oh necessary stillness

Written by opheliac

Published 23rd Oct 2014

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Re: Tarquin

Anonymous

23rd Oct 2014 6:49pm

╰☆╮You said a lot in so few lines. Great job!╰☆╮

23rd Oct 2014 9:04pm

thank you Brittany :)

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Re: Tarquin

24th Oct 2014 1:24am

feeling the tension in your poem, the sorrow of a silent tongue...

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25th Oct 2014 9:27am

glad the tension is there. Thank you JF.

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Re: Tarquin

28th Oct 2014 4:03am

Necessary stillness has some very nice rewards :)

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Re: Tarquin

16th Jun 2015 8:34pm

Yes be quiet we don't want to wake him up. Enjoyed.

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Re. Tarquin

Anonymous

4th Aug 2016 8:15pm

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5th Aug 2016 8:40pm

Thank you

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