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Razor
Shh goes society
we must all follow these unspoken rules
blinded by the biased
of people so focused on judgment
it goes all around
making people feel down
razors and knives
a curse to teens around the world
scars and bloody sheets
a result of the ways
the world has befallen
people trying to fit in
so many failing
so there comes these lies
people dying
everyone crying
oh how these words of so many
cause in these days
much more pain then a slap upside the head
abuse to ones self esteem
silent screams
so many broken and falling
labels more intense
then renowned viruses
but life goes on
so far nothing has changed
these words of so many
cutting deeper then knives
more blood spilled
as these teens have best friends
a little beloved
something to cause pain
oh yes....the renowned razor
a bloody kiss of metal
seeming to be craved..
we must all follow these unspoken rules
blinded by the biased
of people so focused on judgment
it goes all around
making people feel down
razors and knives
a curse to teens around the world
scars and bloody sheets
a result of the ways
the world has befallen
people trying to fit in
so many failing
so there comes these lies
people dying
everyone crying
oh how these words of so many
cause in these days
much more pain then a slap upside the head
abuse to ones self esteem
silent screams
so many broken and falling
labels more intense
then renowned viruses
but life goes on
so far nothing has changed
these words of so many
cutting deeper then knives
more blood spilled
as these teens have best friends
a little beloved
something to cause pain
oh yes....the renowned razor
a bloody kiss of metal
seeming to be craved..
Published 21st Oct 2014
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10th Dec 2014 8:43pm
Remarkable. Words can be used as razors that tear deep into the hearts of teens, leading to a use of razors to kiss the pain away unleashing bloody passion that drains their life slowly. Nice ink.
11th Dec 2014 3:59am
Very true they can u-u I know that rather well unfortuntally... Cx and thank you,glad you liked it
