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Unconsciously You Gulp
if I loved you
any more
I`d be a
stalker at your
door
step
mourning
while you slept
deeply
couldn't hear me
as I wept
into
your garden
toxins
mingle with
the orange
picked
to squeeze into
the Juice
and pulp
unconsciously
you gulp
til we are
ONE
any more
I`d be a
stalker at your
door
step
mourning
while you slept
deeply
couldn't hear me
as I wept
into
your garden
toxins
mingle with
the orange
picked
to squeeze into
the Juice
and pulp
unconsciously
you gulp
til we are
ONE
Published 16th Oct 2014
| Edited 18th Oct 2014
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16th Oct 2014 8:05pm
simply beautiful Alon.... looks like some one has the apple in your eye!
that is GOOD to see glad someone is making you happy again
XOXOXO
Fire
that is GOOD to see glad someone is making you happy again
XOXOXO
Fire
17th Oct 2014 9:47pm
18th Oct 2014 7:46am
18th Oct 2014 3:57pm
Thank You Grace ---
"If I loved you any more
Id be a Stalker"
popped into my head --- and then I tried to let the rest just flow without thinking too much...
"If I loved you any more
Id be a Stalker"
popped into my head --- and then I tried to let the rest just flow without thinking too much...
19th Oct 2014 6:32pm
Awesome line to birth a poem.:) Sometimes they are the muses...the first line. Take care there, D.
