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The Rebirth of Dyin'
It was so many moons aglow
when love first shot it's bow
into a tattered, battered heart...
Like life, 'pon reflection's show
a dream believer believed
what it didn't know, that grandiose
promises to make dreams come
into view, is a true illusionist' art...
Thus, a cycle of dyin' to die
again, rebirths such ceaseless
cryin' as the dream seamlessly
tears an ocean's pour which
remains soundless to love's ears...
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Re: The Rebirth of Dyin'
13th Oct 2014 8:58pm
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13th Oct 2014 9:12pm
Oh my goodness! Ur here! :) been awhile my friend
n I'm happy to hear from u again, thank u so much :)
Truly appreciate ur support
n I'm happy to hear from u again, thank u so much :)
Truly appreciate ur support
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14th Oct 2014 5:35am
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14th Oct 2014 9:42am
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Re: The Rebirth of Dyin'
15th Oct 2014 5:09am
These words are very deep. I had to read it twice just to try to grasp the concept in my mind.like it much =)
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15th Oct 2014 5:45am
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15th Oct 2014 12:36pm
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15th Oct 2014 12:52pm
Wow made you purr n took ur breath all in a few mins!?
I must be onto something! lol truly, n always
I'm flattered n greatly humbled by your sweet praises n support mi amore! :)
I must be onto something! lol truly, n always
I'm flattered n greatly humbled by your sweet praises n support mi amore! :)
Re: The Rebirth of Dyin'
18th Oct 2014 7:22am
It was so many moons aglow
when love first shot it's bow
into a tattered, battered heart...
That is so beautiful Poetik and in most cases very true. One wishes that it can be sustained through life...'first love kiss...an eternal bonded dance.' Enjoyed the read:) a talented one you are.
when love first shot it's bow
into a tattered, battered heart...
That is so beautiful Poetik and in most cases very true. One wishes that it can be sustained through life...'first love kiss...an eternal bonded dance.' Enjoyed the read:) a talented one you are.
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re: Re: The Rebirth of Dyin'
18th Oct 2014 11:53am
Thank you my sweet Grace, I'm blushing!
N yea can't agree with you more bout our
wishing it to last, guess that's why they call us dreamers huh?
:)
N yea can't agree with you more bout our
wishing it to last, guess that's why they call us dreamers huh?
:)