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lotion
before u unlock the door you
hand me the key i lick it
push me down i am not on the pill
flashbacks of burst circle
fuck like a theme park
and ur dick in my dry mouth and
give in and be ugly
tear raw letters out of my back
i i i i i
i dont listen because i hear
other voices i hear you cry frustrated
i lie so stiff and then your
hand slams into me
take all your advantage this is not
the last time though i say it is
hand me the key i lick it
push me down i am not on the pill
flashbacks of burst circle
fuck like a theme park
and ur dick in my dry mouth and
give in and be ugly
tear raw letters out of my back
i i i i i
i dont listen because i hear
other voices i hear you cry frustrated
i lie so stiff and then your
hand slams into me
take all your advantage this is not
the last time though i say it is
Written by
anna_grin
(ANNAN)
Published 10th Oct 2014
| Edited 13th Jul 2018
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Re: lotion
10th Oct 2014 8:13pm
fucking on the floorboards hot! this is the way porn should be written!
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re: Re: lotion
11th Oct 2014 3:54pm
re: re: Re: lotion
12th Oct 2014 7:09am
good call, I misread it. this is violent and serious. I gotta' stop commenting when I'm out of it!
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re: re: re: Re: lotion
13th Oct 2014 11:25pm
Re: lotion
10th Oct 2014 10:05pm
there in the dark recesses of your mind, the realization lurks: the need for that corrupt wickedness. exceptional work...
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Re: lotion
Anonymous
10th Oct 2014 10:21pm
Eye gott lottz uv lowshun.
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Re: lotion
11th Oct 2014 00:43am
I don't really know what
I think, I mean I love the
way you write, but I don't
always get the feeling
behind it, which is particularly
dumb of me considering the
category the poem is in..!
I understand the whole
eroticism thing, but it doesn't
seem very happy...
I think, I mean I love the
way you write, but I don't
always get the feeling
behind it, which is particularly
dumb of me considering the
category the poem is in..!
I understand the whole
eroticism thing, but it doesn't
seem very happy...
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re: re: Re: lotion
12th Oct 2014 00:43am
Re: lotion
11th Oct 2014 5:11am
Re: lotion
11th Oct 2014 1:14pm
right raw well writ & wrought
oh, would it were to 'rescue' you from yOur abuses, but
that, in&of itself is just
mo
bullzhit, right?
Love,
dadayo
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Re: lotion
12th Oct 2014 9:51pm
Very raw write. Sex, pain, abuse and helplessness. It all comes through very clear and bloody.
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Re: lotion
13th Oct 2014 3:22pm
Rape of not only the body but the mind. Good ink. Come check me out I got some Mr. Brimstone shit for that ass. Once again good ink.
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Re: lotion
16th Oct 2014 9:10pm
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
8th May 2019 8:11am
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