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Hold my hand

Please, please hold my hand
Hold my hand
Hold my hand
Hold my hand
Hold my hand
Hold my hand
Hold my hand.
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Please, please stand by my side
By my side
By my side
By my side
Hold my hand
Hold my hand
Hold my hand.
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Please, please don�t start to cry
Start to cry
Start to cry
By my side
By my side
Hold my hand
Hold my hand.
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Please, please don�t push away
Push away
Push away
As you cry
By my side
Hold my hand
Hold my hand.
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Blood falls, as you scratch my face
Scratch my face
Scratch my face
Pushing away
As you cry
By my side
Hold my hand.
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Why do I feel like I�ve died?
Like I�ve died
Scratch on face
Pushed away
As you cry
By my side
Hold my hand.

Written by Mo57

Published 3rd Nov 2009

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Dreaming-demon (Dreaming Demon)

7th Nov 2009 8:24pm

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Dreaming-demon (Dreaming Demon)

8th Nov 2009 2:53am

LmAO....BeSt ReSpOnSe....MaDe mE lAuGh My AsSss OfF

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Anonymous

12th Nov 2009 3:52am

I personally loved the repetition. The structure of this piece was immaculate, and the undefined, and thus mysterious, nature of the story makes it all the more psychologically resonant.