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Nephilim
The angels of old
Cast their halos to the ground
For a taste of female flesh
So voluptous and beautiful
Sublime women no angel could resist
They burned with a passion
They knew they must have them
The forbidden fruit
They decided i'll be damned
Each claimed a woman
For themselves
Made love for the first time
Created celestial beings
Hybrids giants of old
With powers of persuasion
Walked among the humans as Gods
Shaking the heavens and the stars above
Rocking the Earth
Nephilim walk among us to this day
Though you can't see them
You can feel their touch
A secret society
Calling the shots
A host of hybrids
Half human, half angelic
The host of the fallen
Beautiful and evil in nature
Listen quitely and you will hear them singing to the Earth
Kings among us
Their fathers for the taste of female flesh
Gladly took their curse.
Cast their halos to the ground
For a taste of female flesh
So voluptous and beautiful
Sublime women no angel could resist
They burned with a passion
They knew they must have them
The forbidden fruit
They decided i'll be damned
Each claimed a woman
For themselves
Made love for the first time
Created celestial beings
Hybrids giants of old
With powers of persuasion
Walked among the humans as Gods
Shaking the heavens and the stars above
Rocking the Earth
Nephilim walk among us to this day
Though you can't see them
You can feel their touch
A secret society
Calling the shots
A host of hybrids
Half human, half angelic
The host of the fallen
Beautiful and evil in nature
Listen quitely and you will hear them singing to the Earth
Kings among us
Their fathers for the taste of female flesh
Gladly took their curse.
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beautiful
16th Apr 2011 6:27pm
i really liked this poem; it was beautifully written but i think when you wrote 'They new they must have them' new was meant to be knew. i thought i would point that out but other than that i loved it. :)
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re: beautiful
16th Apr 2011 6:34pm
thank you for the heads up I caught that..lol i'm always transposing words..thank you for the lovely comment and the read..peace Crim :)
Wow
16th Apr 2011 6:32pm
re: Wow
16th Apr 2011 6:34pm
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Anonymous
16th Apr 2011 8:02pm
This is beautiful. :] Very surreal. I once read a book about Nephilim. Actually, there is a new one coming out next month! They are demon hunters, right?
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re: ..
16th Apr 2011 8:05pm
They are talked about in the bible they are supposed to be half human half fallen angel supposedly the angels fell for a taste of female flesh..though I don't know the real nature of them.. thank you for the lovely comment peace Crim :)
re: ...
16th Apr 2011 8:05pm
Cool
16th Apr 2011 8:52pm
Very interesting concept....never heard of these things before....liked it...and now have anew bizzare word to throw around...
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re: Cool
16th Apr 2011 9:13pm
review
16th Apr 2011 10:49pm
I adore the subject and your poetic approach to the journey. Your supernatural poems are some of my favorite of your works
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re: review
I've always been interested in the Nephilim..and I love the supernatural..thank you for the lovely comment..I say with a big smile..peace Crim
nice one Lil Lady
17th Apr 2011 3:48pm
hey.. this is awesome Crim :)
i really enjoyed the read
Thanks for publishing
x V x
i really enjoyed the read
Thanks for publishing
x V x
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re: nice one Lil Lady
17th Apr 2011 5:11pm
I
fell in love with this piece ages ago. I feel like I should tell you why. This made me feel a little different from some of your other poems which generally don't require me to look for parallel meanings.
This on the other hand, besides telling a nice story, made me think of myself, the divinity and the sin that constitute me. There is this touch of the nephilim inside every human soul. That's what made this so brilliant to me. Not sure if you had made a conscious effort to bring that impression, but I felt that way.
This on the other hand, besides telling a nice story, made me think of myself, the divinity and the sin that constitute me. There is this touch of the nephilim inside every human soul. That's what made this so brilliant to me. Not sure if you had made a conscious effort to bring that impression, but I felt that way.
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6th Mar 2012 3:40am
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6th Mar 2012 3:41am
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Anonymous
6th Dec 2014 5:52pm
Crim, this is fucking brilliant.. thanks so much for sharing.. love and respect..
Dave
Dave
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re: Re: Nephilim
6th Dec 2014 6:00pm
thank you Dave I was hoping you would like it.. you put a big smile on my face with your comment with love and respect Crim :)