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Mars and Antares
Eyes that view night as an overlooking canvas
on the star splattered beach that I love,
with a Moon flowing soul of Mars and Antares,
like a lost piece of memory, in crimson, thereof.
on the star splattered beach that I love,
with a Moon flowing soul of Mars and Antares,
like a lost piece of memory, in crimson, thereof.
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Re: Mars and Antares
30th Sep 2014 3:55am
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30th Sep 2014 4:02am
Re: Mars and Antares
30th Sep 2014 6:07am
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30th Sep 2014 7:24am
I know that I am mortal by nature and ephemeral, but when I trace at my pleasure the windings to and fro of the heavenly bodies, I no longer touch earth with my feet. I stand in the presence of Zeus himself, and I take my fill of ambrosia. ~ Ptolemy
Re: Mars and Antares
30th Sep 2014 3:52pm
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1st Oct 2014 4:13am
Re: Mars and Antares
30th Sep 2014 5:03pm
I love the mixture in your
writings, the scientific bent
and the romantic outlook..:)
writings, the scientific bent
and the romantic outlook..:)
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1st Oct 2014 4:11am
Re: Mars and Antares
30th Sep 2014 7:03pm
re: Re: Mars and Antares
1st Oct 2014 4:13am
Re: Mars and Antares
30th Sep 2014 8:54pm
an understated
bit of magic
needing no more
said
\
you have thee
gift
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Re: Mars and Antares
30th Sep 2014 11:12pm
This reminds of star gazing out in the middle of the ocean, where the stars cover the sky in all directions around you. Miss that. Enjoyed.
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re: Re: Mars and Antares
1st Oct 2014 4:07am
Wow, that's quite an image in itself; the amazing blackness of night with no hinder of light pollution. Thank you.