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Where evil Lies: Death's unrested Chambers
*long story short-this was originally meant to be
in a contest for Black Delia's Halloween Comp.
but me being the poetry rebel I am, didn't wanna
be confined to form Ssoooooo....
Lol anyways, decided to Dedicate it to her Comp.*
Hypogeum,
a museum
of the macabre
Dark souls lost,
permanent roommates
of life's fated scar...
Hypogeum,
eyes no see 'em
the devil's angels'
address is hell
separated by dimensions
apparitions cast upon the
livin' it's insipid spell...
Hypogeum,
a place to free them
as they lie in unrest
regretful for another
Halloween's past...
n' another soul
failed, felled
by evil's hand
at Lucifer's behest...
in a contest for Black Delia's Halloween Comp.
but me being the poetry rebel I am, didn't wanna
be confined to form Ssoooooo....
Lol anyways, decided to Dedicate it to her Comp.*
Hypogeum,
a museum
of the macabre
Dark souls lost,
permanent roommates
of life's fated scar...
Hypogeum,
eyes no see 'em
the devil's angels'
address is hell
separated by dimensions
apparitions cast upon the
livin' it's insipid spell...
Hypogeum,
a place to free them
as they lie in unrest
regretful for another
Halloween's past...
n' another soul
failed, felled
by evil's hand
at Lucifer's behest...
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Re: Where evil Lies: Death's unrested Chambers
28th Sep 2014 1:34am
re: Re: Where evil Lies: Death's unrested Chambers
28th Sep 2014 4:45am
Thank you my dear lady, yup dark
but Halloween is supposed to be scary
n dark true? lol
Appreciate u always :)
but Halloween is supposed to be scary
n dark true? lol
Appreciate u always :)
Re: Where evil Lies: Death's unrested Chambers
28th Sep 2014 2:58am
Excellent it would of been a GREAT submission Po!
Still it is very Erie and smokey dream-state even.
nicely said, I love it!!!
Thank you for the mention
((((((((((((Po))))))))))))))))
Still it is very Erie and smokey dream-state even.
nicely said, I love it!!!
Thank you for the mention
((((((((((((Po))))))))))))))))
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re: Re: Where evil Lies: Death's unrested Chambers
28th Sep 2014 12:55pm
Aaaawww my dear Broomie, so sweet if you to say
that! n I'm grateful as always, glad you liked n
It was my pleasure to attempt to highlight ur comp. :)
Appreciate u!
that! n I'm grateful as always, glad you liked n
It was my pleasure to attempt to highlight ur comp. :)
Appreciate u!
Re: Where evil Lies: Death's unrested Chambers
28th Sep 2014 1:46pm
re: Re: Where evil Lies: Death's unrested Chambers
28th Sep 2014 3:52pm
Re: Where evil Lies: Death's unrested Chambers
28th Sep 2014 4:07pm
re: Re: Where evil Lies: Death's unrested Chambers
28th Sep 2014 4:10pm
Thank you my sweet desire, your so wonderful
I'm always honored by your presence n support :)
I'm always honored by your presence n support :)
Re: Where evil Lies: Death's unrested Chambers
Anonymous
28th Sep 2014 9:48pm
Happy Halloween! This fits well. Really like this dark poem. :)
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re: Re: Where evil Lies: Death's unrested Chambers
29th Sep 2014 4:32am
Happy Halloween sweetheart! yea I'm way early
on my scary spill I know but hey is there really a bad time to be
dark? lol thank u so much... :)
on my scary spill I know but hey is there really a bad time to be
dark? lol thank u so much... :)
Re: Where evil Lies: Death's unrested Chambers
30th Sep 2014 4:29am
Spooky, you used the L word..:) Lucy I'm home. And the classic Latin. The writing is excellent.
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re: Re: Where evil Lies: Death's unrested Chambers
30th Sep 2014 4:44am
Yup I sure did huh!? lol anyways, it was meant to be a bit chilly
I'm happy it worked n happier to see u here... Thank u so much my sweet one :)
I'm happy it worked n happier to see u here... Thank u so much my sweet one :)
Re: Where evil Lies: Death's unrested Chambers
30th Sep 2014 5:17pm
MAN, You do have a dark side!! LOL!!
Great write Bro. P!!!
A Righteous Halloween read!!
Awesome dedication!!
Sir Lancelott
Great write Bro. P!!!
A Righteous Halloween read!!
Awesome dedication!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: Where evil Lies: Death's unrested Chambers
30th Sep 2014 6:30pm
Lol yea so I've been told lol
Still in all I'm happy you liked bro. N truly appreciate your continued support :)
Still in all I'm happy you liked bro. N truly appreciate your continued support :)
Re: Where evil Lies: Death's unrested Chambers
1st Oct 2014 1:17pm
re: Re: Where evil Lies: Death's unrested Chambers
1st Oct 2014 1:41pm
Lol rebel with cause? nah I'm just a rebel lol
serioysly u reminded me that I wrote a piece
a while back called "Rebel-without a pause"
lol n yea, thank u my sweet sweet Mami! :)
serioysly u reminded me that I wrote a piece
a while back called "Rebel-without a pause"
lol n yea, thank u my sweet sweet Mami! :)
Re: Where evil Lies: Death's unrested Chambers
12th Oct 2014 3:05am
I don't know that I ever read one of your dark writes, but this is incredible!
I'm so ready for Halloween ; )
I'm so ready for Halloween ; )
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re: Re: Where evil Lies: Death's unrested Chambers
12th Oct 2014 3:15am
Aaaawwww I'm so happy you finally did n liked it! Thank u my friend, I'm flattered by your words of support always :)