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word to ray rice
beefin with your bitch
is like fighting someone
with no formal training
in a structured enviroment
they might slip a wild one
in here and there
and i don't wanna have to
and i don't wanna hit you
but we both be sorry
at least a lil bit
when i break your fn arm
is like fighting someone
with no formal training
in a structured enviroment
they might slip a wild one
in here and there
and i don't wanna have to
and i don't wanna hit you
but we both be sorry
at least a lil bit
when i break your fn arm
Published 26th Sep 2014
| Edited 27th Sep 2014
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Anonymous
26th Sep 2014 5:01pm
and from such a sweet, charming, chivalrous man
lol
just hope you stay lucky, getting the ones that fight like untrained morons, getting the odd lucky hit
some girls will make you shut it and tighten your game or get knocked out
but, women from my city are renowned for kicking ass
:)
I dig what you're saying though because even as a woman I've felt that way with a few chicks (and a cpl of dudes)over the years.
nicely put with so few words. Impact poetry!
shine on bro
lol
just hope you stay lucky, getting the ones that fight like untrained morons, getting the odd lucky hit
some girls will make you shut it and tighten your game or get knocked out
but, women from my city are renowned for kicking ass
:)
I dig what you're saying though because even as a woman I've felt that way with a few chicks (and a cpl of dudes)over the years.
nicely put with so few words. Impact poetry!
shine on bro
"I'm the guy who tells you there's guys you can hit and guys you can't."
-mr french
-mr french
27th Sep 2014 3:08am
I have known men who I would've loved to slaughter and pickle in drums. And I've seen women with lovely husbands who were so shrieky I would've love to the same to them. Anyway...just saying. I empathise with your sentiment. Enjoyed the read too, John...very down to earth.
Anonymous
28th Sep 2014 10:46pm
fuckuhz
3rd Oct 2014 5:55am
It gets grizzly when you break it down, but yeeeah... For that kind of strength is a whole lot of restraint in walking away. Some people still escalate. Seems like an incomplete conversation most cases, so thanks for releasing this one.
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Nov 2018 2:45pm
3rd Oct 2014 5:52pm
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