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ABC's
Alone now in the cold night
Because you left me to suffer
Cut me with your piercing words, and now I...
Drown in depression and sorrow
Everything I thought was true was a lie
Fuck you, fuck this, fuck it all
Get out of my heart, get out of my life
Hell is awaiting you for what you've done
It's too late to apologize now
Just accept the consequences for your sins and crimes
Know that you just threw away the chance of a lifetime
Love you had, everlasting and overflowing
Maybe if you hadn't waited so long
Now it's too late, I've faded away and it's...
Over now, once and for good
Pray that you'll be forgiven for what you've done
Question yourself over and over why you did it, and was it worth it, you...
Ripped my heart out
Shredded it into pieces
Then threw it away in the dirt
Unforgiven and unloved is what you are now
Vicious and heartless is how you acted towards me
When will you ever learn, when will you see
X marks the spot on my chest where my heart goes
You need to put it back please, for it's no longer yours
Zero...it's the amount of love i have for you now, it's all you'll ever have
Because you left me to suffer
Cut me with your piercing words, and now I...
Drown in depression and sorrow
Everything I thought was true was a lie
Fuck you, fuck this, fuck it all
Get out of my heart, get out of my life
Hell is awaiting you for what you've done
It's too late to apologize now
Just accept the consequences for your sins and crimes
Know that you just threw away the chance of a lifetime
Love you had, everlasting and overflowing
Maybe if you hadn't waited so long
Now it's too late, I've faded away and it's...
Over now, once and for good
Pray that you'll be forgiven for what you've done
Question yourself over and over why you did it, and was it worth it, you...
Ripped my heart out
Shredded it into pieces
Then threw it away in the dirt
Unforgiven and unloved is what you are now
Vicious and heartless is how you acted towards me
When will you ever learn, when will you see
X marks the spot on my chest where my heart goes
You need to put it back please, for it's no longer yours
Zero...it's the amount of love i have for you now, it's all you'll ever have
Written by
cjmshadow
(Poetic Joker)
Published 15th Apr 2011
| Edited 22nd May 2011
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different
15th Apr 2011 1:12pm
not what i usually do, and it started as a discussion on ABC. just came up with it so it's probably not perfect lol. but it's something new so i figured what the hell. as my other poems, this one is also about me ex, and the story about that is described in my other poem.
re: different
15th Apr 2011 5:52pm
dude pleez dont hate me but can i do my own version of this????? hell i am anyways your my new inspiration!!!
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re: re: different
15th Apr 2011 8:19pm
haha dude go for it! i actually like this the more i look at it. glad to be of service :) can't wait to read yours. there's so many different options with this version i love it
<3
wow!
19th Apr 2011 8:55pm
that is great...
can i print this one also...
can't wait to read more....
can i print this one also...
can't wait to read more....
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re: wow!
20th Apr 2011 11:35am
yead go ahead and print it lol and thanks. i like it too haha. means a lot to me this poem
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22nd Apr 2011 9:12pm
you used the alphabet to describe everyones broken heart its deep and wonderful all in the same i loved it it spoke about all the things that hurts before during and after ons heart is broken.
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re: .....
22nd Apr 2011 10:10pm
thanks. i really like this one. i didn't plan it out or anything. i was commenting on the forum for ABC and ended up just making it up on the spot. it's different but i love it now
Guilty as Charged
22nd Apr 2011 10:19pm
I think you do a good job emoting in this piece, and because I read your bio that is probably more so. Watch out for too many cliches......"Ripped my heart open" and "Pray for forgiveness"....find a new way to say those things. It's clear you love to write and keep it up. Good work.
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re: Guilty as Charged
22nd Apr 2011 10:21pm
thanks Iridium, i'll work on that. and yeah, a lot of my emotion i pour into the poems. it's what helps me write better and also keep myself from hurting myself...sometimes lol
I like it
Anonymous
22nd Apr 2011 10:55pm
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re: I like it
23rd Apr 2011 00:16am
thanks. yeah it sucks when you read a poem like this and go "hey i can relate!" and then remember the pain you went through.
amazing
1st May 2011 10:07pm
re: amazing
1st May 2011 10:12pm
enjoyed
Anonymous
22nd Aug 2011 2:31pm
very clever,nicely done!
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re: enjoyed
22nd Aug 2011 4:33pm
thank you :) i like it lol. i'll never think of ABC's the same way again lol
creative
22nd Dec 2011 8:08pm
re: creative
22nd Dec 2011 9:08pm