Content Warning : Do you want to continue?
This poem contains content which some readers may find disturbing.
It is unsuitable for children or anyone who is easily offended.
YES
I am over 18 years old, I have been warned and I still want to read this poem.
I am over 18 years old, I have been warned and I still want to read this poem.
NO
I don't want to read this type of content, take me back to the previous page.
I don't want to read this type of content, take me back to the previous page.
deepundergroundpoetry.com
Dilemma !!!
Is it love or just lust ?
He says he loves me
Cant do without me at nights
Days are hopelessly empty
Often full of fights.
Wanting things his own way
Caring not a bit
I beg him to talk to me
He yells : I don't give a shit.
The warm feeling when tipsy
He tries to pick up the pieces
But how Can I keep him lifetime drunk
SO that his love never ceases.
As the smoke lingers off his tongue
And the smirk so evident on my face
Every inch of his flesh rhythm
And my eyes compete with the liquor race.
Rude, dominating, sharp , unpleasant
Will probably describe him the best
Being loved by the one who hates all
Should I consider being blessed ?
He says he loves me
Cant do without me at nights
Days are hopelessly empty
Often full of fights.
Wanting things his own way
Caring not a bit
I beg him to talk to me
He yells : I don't give a shit.
The warm feeling when tipsy
He tries to pick up the pieces
But how Can I keep him lifetime drunk
SO that his love never ceases.
As the smoke lingers off his tongue
And the smirk so evident on my face
Every inch of his flesh rhythm
And my eyes compete with the liquor race.
Rude, dominating, sharp , unpleasant
Will probably describe him the best
Being loved by the one who hates all
Should I consider being blessed ?
Published 17th Sep 2014
| Edited 24th Sep 2014
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 6
reading list entries 1
comments 8
reads 1016
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
17th Sep 2014 7:51pm
There must be something you love and need about (?) him. Just take care. It IS a dilemma and you discribed it very good in your great and strong poem, Brinda.
18th Sep 2014 5:56am
18th Sep 2014 6:14am
a situation many have had to face; when the heart and the mind want to take different paths.
18th Sep 2014 6:18am
Anonymous
18th Sep 2014 7:54pm
Submitting to unknown always thrills us
Enjoy the pleasure and compete with the drink
Enjoy the pleasure and compete with the drink
19th Sep 2014 5:41am
Anonymous
7th Jan 2015 4:08pm
A true Dilemma.. It's always dicey at best, when competing with the drink.. Thanks for sharing..
Dave
Dave
8th Jan 2015 9:04am
