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Glowing in his Gaze !!!
An impulse breaks through
Making heartbeats deep and fast
Squeezing me against his chest
all geared up for the real blast!!!
I clasped into his bosom
with a mere delicious gaze
encircling in throbbing bliss
makes me flutter in his love maze !!!
He flows smoother than a river
He glows brighter than a lamp
He moves slower than a snail
He sucks harder than a vamp !!!
Filled with lust, the dirty lover
Shows no mercy when comes over
Stroking my body & exploring the soul
Struggles to reach its goal,the love hole.
The way he whispers "more"
Tasting me again like a sin
I experience the most eloquent silence
with two mouths meeting in a kiss.
Making heartbeats deep and fast
Squeezing me against his chest
all geared up for the real blast!!!
I clasped into his bosom
with a mere delicious gaze
encircling in throbbing bliss
makes me flutter in his love maze !!!
He flows smoother than a river
He glows brighter than a lamp
He moves slower than a snail
He sucks harder than a vamp !!!
Filled with lust, the dirty lover
Shows no mercy when comes over
Stroking my body & exploring the soul
Struggles to reach its goal,the love hole.
The way he whispers "more"
Tasting me again like a sin
I experience the most eloquent silence
with two mouths meeting in a kiss.
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Re: Glowing in his Gaze !!!
Anonymous
6th Oct 2014 12:24pm
Awesome - you can feel, and receive, the heat in this one... Very sexy writing
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6th Oct 2014 12:32pm
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Anonymous
6th Oct 2014 3:20pm
Anytime :)
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Anonymous
6th Oct 2014 6:55pm
too sexy... should be censored...
such sensual expressions
you make me love erotica more n more
such sensual expressions
you make me love erotica more n more
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7th Oct 2014 6:16am
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9th Oct 2014 5:18am
First two stanza read like Bogart and Bacall shooting a scene. Next three stanzas read like what happens after they got home.
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9th Oct 2014 8:21am
Re: Glowing in his Gaze !!!
10th Oct 2014 5:53am
My mind started "Glowing"..while "Gazing" at your master writing!!! Super like!!!!
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10th Oct 2014 10:19am
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21st Nov 2014 9:59pm
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six centi no no no... not really....
its cold but I am
ON
wait and see
how soon I blow ,
what?
yours!
no no no no!
tis really very cold ....
touching minus
read the rest there if u wish to
its cold but I am
ON
wait and see
how soon I blow ,
what?
yours!
no no no no!
tis really very cold ....
touching minus
read the rest there if u wish to
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14th Dec 2014 7:43pm
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