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Submerged
5 pound Cinder blocks
tied around my ankle in a sailors knot
Blindfolded and bruised face in shock.
Nothing and nobody here to catch me as I fall.
I went down hard!
I played my wild card and lost.
Does anybody know what time it is?
Or even the day??
It's been 7 months since I left on a mental
breakdown hiatus all expenses paid.
Not sure where I went or when I'll be back.
tied around my ankle in a sailors knot
Blindfolded and bruised face in shock.
Nothing and nobody here to catch me as I fall.
I went down hard!
I played my wild card and lost.
Does anybody know what time it is?
Or even the day??
It's been 7 months since I left on a mental
breakdown hiatus all expenses paid.
Not sure where I went or when I'll be back.
Published 16th Sep 2014
| Edited 24th Oct 2015
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Anonymous
16th Sep 2014 5:19am
Feel ya Zazzles.. I'm on one of those mental breakdown hiatus' as well. Good write.
16th Sep 2014 6:30pm
Hey JT, thanks for coming by and reading my stuff!
I sure appreciate your feelings!
Always
Zazzles Xxx
I sure appreciate your feelings!
Always
Zazzles Xxx
Anonymous
16th Sep 2014 5:22am
Sweet Lady......I feel your words as if I had written this. Sending luv, hugs and prayers. Xo :)
16th Sep 2014 6:52pm
Hi, flowergirl ")
Yeah it feels like this sometimes!
Thanks for the visit...
always
Zazzles
Yeah it feels like this sometimes!
Thanks for the visit...
always
Zazzles
16th Sep 2014 9:27am
Oh no my poor Zazzles...what a painful write...but beautifully written...Pen on those emotions!!!
16th Sep 2014 6:53pm
Awww, yeah I get like this at times.
I'll be alright Ss
Thanks for the visit my friend...
Always
Zazzles
I'll be alright Ss
Thanks for the visit my friend...
Always
Zazzles
16th Sep 2014 1:22pm
Anonymous
16th Sep 2014 6:19pm
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16th Sep 2014 6:57pm
Awww, thank you Gabriel!
I appreciate you coming by ")
And thanks for the compliment on my nick name!
Always
Zazzles Xxx
I appreciate you coming by ")
And thanks for the compliment on my nick name!
Always
Zazzles Xxx
16th Sep 2014 6:50pm
Oh shit so ur here to visit ME huh!? lol
seriously, you'll be fine becuz I know my Broomie
is a tough cookie :)
seriously, you'll be fine becuz I know my Broomie
is a tough cookie :)
16th Sep 2014 6:58pm
good one Po "D
Yeah I always get through this crazy!
Thanks my darling for all your support!
Always
Broomie ")
Yeah I always get through this crazy!
Thanks my darling for all your support!
Always
Broomie ")
16th Sep 2014 10:11pm
that's a serious write. kinda lost in the twilight zone w/a one-way ticket, maybe. your potent voice echoes in this...
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19th Sep 2014 4:49am
Now that's a sorrowed song writ straight from the heart, Zazz.
Beautiful
Be blessed with SMILE
Beautiful
Be blessed with SMILE
19th Sep 2014 7:22am
20th Sep 2014 3:50am
I hate those. you'll be fine jackie have another smoke and a beer. sending hugs your way.
20th Sep 2014 4:53am
20th Sep 2014 5:11am
It is just another journey
A Journey of hidden strength
Zazzle will rise
Brilliant in every way
Teaching us about
The highs and lows
A Journey of hidden strength
Zazzle will rise
Brilliant in every way
Teaching us about
The highs and lows
Hey now how nice to see you AS
it's been awhile ")
So glad you can relate on some level
but hope you're not feeling the Cinder Block Blues too!
Thanks for the visit!!
Zazzles "D
it's been awhile ")
So glad you can relate on some level
but hope you're not feeling the Cinder Block Blues too!
Thanks for the visit!!
Zazzles "D
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9th Nov 2015 9:33am
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