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Show Me
Show me......
All of the things that I've missed out on all of these years
Show me......
What you have been longing for
Show me.......
How to let go and embrace life again
Show me........
The strength of your arms around me
Show me........
The warm moist touch of your kiss
Show me........
What it is to be truly desired
Show me.........
How to leave you wanting for nothing yet needng more
Show me.........
How it feels to be completely sated and flush
Mmmmmmmm......please show me
These things and so much more
All of the things that I've missed out on all of these years
Show me......
What you have been longing for
Show me.......
How to let go and embrace life again
Show me........
The strength of your arms around me
Show me........
The warm moist touch of your kiss
Show me........
What it is to be truly desired
Show me.........
How to leave you wanting for nothing yet needng more
Show me.........
How it feels to be completely sated and flush
Mmmmmmmm......please show me
These things and so much more
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Re: Show Me
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15th Sep 2014 9:00pm
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15th Sep 2014 10:45pm
great poem, and
easy to relate too
left me wanting someone to show me :)
easy to relate too
left me wanting someone to show me :)
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16th Sep 2014 5:01pm
Isnt that what we all want n our own way?
Thanx for giving me a read hun
Thanx for giving me a read hun
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15th Sep 2014 11:13pm
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16th Sep 2014 5:03pm
X darlin what a speciak n tempting offer.
I bet u r one heck of a teacher
I bet u r one heck of a teacher
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16th Sep 2014 8:44am
This gave me a sense of mystery. Allowing my mind to ponder what they would be to me. I truly love that I can relate
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16th Sep 2014 5:09pm
Mystery can b very alluring...
Sexiness isnt always about crude n ur face behavior
Sadly we tend to forget that
Thanx for giving me a read hun
Sexiness isnt always about crude n ur face behavior
Sadly we tend to forget that
Thanx for giving me a read hun
Re: Show Me
16th Sep 2014 1:56pm
Good ink good write highly enjoyed. Check out my poems I believe you would enjoy them also.
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Re: Show Me
21st Sep 2014 00:28am
All requests I can identify with. I enjoy the unique structure of this piece. May all theses ardent desires come true.
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re: Re: Show Me
21st Sep 2014 00:36am
Well ty GW.....should i keep u informed as to how my quest to works out? Lol
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21st Sep 2014 00:55am
Please do and I'll keep you informed with the status of my quest as well :)
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