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What's that smell !
I want to rip my skin off my bones
fall down on the ground
and gnaw my face off
put my arm down my throat
and pull my stomach right out
chop it into pieces
and let it rot in the sun
I want to put my brain in a toaster
and spread some marmalade on it
eat it up and shit it out
or maybe I just want another day,
maybe I just want to say
Shit Happens!
fall down on the ground
and gnaw my face off
put my arm down my throat
and pull my stomach right out
chop it into pieces
and let it rot in the sun
I want to put my brain in a toaster
and spread some marmalade on it
eat it up and shit it out
or maybe I just want another day,
maybe I just want to say
Shit Happens!
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15th Sep 2014 00:00am
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Anonymous
15th Sep 2014 1:53am
Mercy!!! Hope another day brings a smile. Dark and vivid for sure. Relatable vent for sure. Xo :)
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15th Sep 2014 2:01am
Very clever Hashman, hmmm, where do you come up with your clever wit 'cause I sure do love it!
Hey) ) ) ) I hope you have a great week Hun!
Hugs*
Broomie
Hey) ) ) ) I hope you have a great week Hun!
Hugs*
Broomie
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15th Sep 2014 2:02am
Hopefully those days a few and far between! Know how you feel. Good ink!
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15th Sep 2014 3:22pm
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15th Sep 2014 2:43am
Whaaaaaaattt? Well at least you can release it thru your ink.
Tomorrow is a new day ; )
Tomorrow is a new day ; )
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15th Sep 2014 3:32pm
We all know that helps...here we are together today,right where tomorrow brought us (peace Lena)
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Anonymous
15th Sep 2014 4:37am
holy &%$# whoaaa Mr. Hash...!
you just hit it out of the ballpark with this one ;)
somedays we're the bird and somedays we're the statue ;)
you just hit it out of the ballpark with this one ;)
somedays we're the bird and somedays we're the statue ;)
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Anonymous
15th Sep 2014 12:33pm
I love it..that's all :)
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15th Sep 2014 8:44pm
Awww ... that's real tough (and dynamic and cool) stuff. What happened to you? Let me comfort you ... *hug*.
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16th Sep 2014 00:05am
Dear Miss Chi,"it must have been the roses" (the dead)...thank you for the hug it was nice and warm :)
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5th Nov 2014 9:37am
Great job converting your emotions into imagery.
I feel the same way sometimes.
I feel the same way sometimes.
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6th Nov 2014 11:53pm